Arr, let's take a look!
Feel free to just make any 'ole user page. Not
required, but there isn't much of a reason to not. Could just be a character listing, even.
In the perfect would you woulda linked to the species, occupation and rank. None of these things are at all required, though, so oh well. In the doubly perfect code you might also give her a
specialty code. Looks like she is a 05A - A armorer.
Plot is fine and has space for techies - However, do note you will also be a PA pilot, so make sure you are aware of the Mindy and such shenanigans.
Description looks good! Personality is fine! History... I am not entirely sure, come to think of it, if that is how the various schools work - I think it's all a subset of the three months of basic training. This... Doesn't really matter, though, so that's good!
Skills... You can take some personal skills, if you want. Seems the only one you picked up was knowledge, everything else occupational/package. Something catches your eye it's not out of the realm of impossibility. Still, however, this is all good.
Inventory isn't personalized, so obviously that's good.
Fiances.
... You don't have to keep track of fiances if you don't want to. It rarely, if ever, comes up and usually when it does it's player-fluff. You certainly can, mind, but don't feel
required. Otherwise, all fine.
You did good! I am not the GM for that plot, of course, so I can't really be all
approved and junk, but a good look over looks like you did a lot better then some regulars do! Outstanding.
