Can we get a link to the salvage agreement mentioned in this line: "the short lived UX-12 salvage agreement with Yamatai"? Not doubting it exists; just want to see the roleplay get some credit.
Same with this line: "Official condemnation ceased the second that Yamatai announced decriminalization of membership of hostile Freespacer groups, and the Bizarre began to recruit from their former members in earnest."
I would move the "relationships" paragraphs into their own section lower on the page. Helps break up the text.
Now that the short issues are out of the way, the "big" one, that probably is more of an explainer:
From where does the money come that the marketplace makes?
If we look at this like a kind of farmers market, the money comes from an outside source β customers buy products made by denizens of the Bizarre. Those customers make their money outside the farmers market.
You mention some trading with Yamatai and Nepleslia as well as the obvious Freespacer-only trading, but I want to make sure I understand that when it comes to actual currency, it's from trading with those two outside partners. Because it's my impression that even post-Schism, even after Nepleslia taking them on as a protectorate, Freespacers don't really do money. They're not about currency; they're about maintaining the society as a whole, which you talk about some in the submission.
I don't think this is a huge hitch; it's probably a misunderstanding on my part. I just want to make sure I understand how the Grand Bizarre makes money when the Freespacers, its principal set of customers, don't use it.