"Freethinker Liniment Four Two" <-- Is this a wikified char? If not, why?
"Wired connection to standard Freespacer mindware ports, and requires needed software to be uploaded to internal mindware storage or a connected bridging device to function." <-- Missing a subject in this sentence. "It requires wired connection" ... ?
"The innermost layer: An easily produced and easily cleaned form-fitting material" <-- Did I miss what the actual material is? I couldn't find it.
Other than those things, this is an incredibly detailed and well-designed submission. Well done, Monty.
I'm breaking apart the main submission from the accessories, however β not because the accessories are a problem, but there's a lot of them and I want to take time going over them. Can you resubmit the accessories separately, please?