Thanks for the review! I actually thought it was the other way around in the UK for some reason, but nope, I was just double wrong. This should be fixed now.
Replaced the line break-heavy sections with bullet points. Hope that is acceptable.
Honestly, it is probably worth noting that I'm going to be away from home for this weekend, so there is no mega rush in getting this approved. This was just getting the ball rolling, since there will likely be another big plot element thing that needs approving, as well as one or two more pages for helping people build spacer characters.