Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
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Here are some fixes this article still needs:
I don't see any issues with this submission, except for the excessive range on the one heavy ammunition:
Galactic Horizon 7.7x60mm
- Effective Range: 3,600meters/3937yards
I would like to see this reduced to a more reasonable effective range. My suggestion would be:
Effective Range: 2,500meters
Maximum Range: 3,000 meters with reduced accuracy.
Thank you,