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no major issues with this article, tiss approved for all intended purposes BUT
me being a layout freak i noticed a couple of funky headers up in here, not major major stuff but just to tidy up the structure a lil bit
The mobility heady is listed as a primary header if you look at the quick thing at the top of the page when it probably falls more as a sub header of About the Armour, you also have all the subheaders of about the armour as two sizes smaller when they would be perfeclt fine as just one size smaller
personally i would put the history section up as a sub section of about the armour as well
originally i was going to say the systems could be bumped up a size to be in line with power systems but looking at it again it seems to work fine like that since they all rely on the power anyway
anyway thats all from me, afaik this stuff wont hold up approval so its just optional stuff really and if i did a bad job at explaining it i am happy to make the small edits myself to give an example ^^
I think I forgot to remove the history section because the about section explains it well enough and the few words I did have under history were just repeating the about section anyway.
Honestly I don't remember formatting the sections like that but I guess I goofed, that has been fixed.
*pap* yeah i have no issues with history being removed, i thik for the most part only our semi special gear really needs detailed history and stuff with rp behind it
Just gonna step in here folks, while it may not be necessary personally i think it's a cool idea and it's only personnel scale which does have different outcomes to if it was starship level.
Having weaker joints allows for rp opportunities which, i am probably wrong, but i think skully may have been going for that when he wrote them, you could get the joint busted and while the suit is fine your arm dont work no more.
Afaik it's not against the rules and im not trying to come in and scream over it, just thought I'd share the situation feom my perspective. Essentially its like glowing weak points on a boss and it makes logical sense to have it like this as personnel sized gear usually doesn't have joints that are built to survive .50 cal and the like.
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Hey it's ya boi - I forgot to add a shield system when I made the armour but very much intended for it to have one, it's a thing most GH armours/defensive products have so yeah.