This review is for: Multifunction Optical/Audio Sensory Suite, MOASS
The submitted article is/has…
[check ] A very high level of overall quality
[check ]A general topic sentence under the title header
[no ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[check ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[N/A ] In the proper format/template
[check ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[check ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[check ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[check ] No red and/or broken links
[check ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[check ]Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[check ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[check ]] Obtusely redundant
[check ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[check ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[check ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[check ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[check ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[no ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[check ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[check ] Lacking Detail
[check ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[N/A ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[N/A ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[check ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[check ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Status: Approved.
