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Gartagen Destroyer mk1 "Interloper"
- Thread starter Ira
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Height: 26 meters
Decks: 8 (1.8 meters each)
Numbers do not make sense. 1.8 meters per deck x 8 only = 14.4 meters
Even allowing for a meter of hull on each side 8 decks would be more like 3 meters each.
How many airlocks are installed? You show on the table they are on deck 1, but where are they ?
No details in the living quarters, nothing that tells the player what is in the room, what features etc. Also you mention hygiene, but it is not detailed anywhere? Are their showers, baths, etc. Communal or single
YOu do not explain what a burrow is, this should be described so that a player on this ship has a clear mental image.
Bridge of the inter loper is Interloper, the bridge description is sparse, you mention stations, but give no visual reference of their locations, and what the stations have.
Decks: 8 (1.8 meters each)
Numbers do not make sense. 1.8 meters per deck x 8 only = 14.4 meters
Even allowing for a meter of hull on each side 8 decks would be more like 3 meters each.
How many airlocks are installed? You show on the table they are on deck 1, but where are they ?
No details in the living quarters, nothing that tells the player what is in the room, what features etc. Also you mention hygiene, but it is not detailed anywhere? Are their showers, baths, etc. Communal or single
YOu do not explain what a burrow is, this should be described so that a player on this ship has a clear mental image.
Bridge of the inter loper is Interloper, the bridge description is sparse, you mention stations, but give no visual reference of their locations, and what the stations have.
Missing the About section
Nomenclature missing
Can you give us a measurement of how narrow the corridors are?
For example Star Army passageways are approximately 2 meters wide.
Suggestions: I do not see any kind of damage control stations or equipment for fire fighting.
How many missiles does the ship carry? Where are they stored?
Nomenclature missing
Can you give us a measurement of how narrow the corridors are?
For example Star Army passageways are approximately 2 meters wide.
Suggestions: I do not see any kind of damage control stations or equipment for fire fighting.
How many missiles does the ship carry? Where are they stored?
