Approved Submission Ge-D1-1a - Specter-Class Patrol Craft

[Nashoba]

Submission Type: Starship
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:geshrinari_shipyards:specter_class_starship

Faction: Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? Yes, Me
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? Nope

Notes: This is a replacement for two of Geshrinari Shipyard designs that were not fully fleshed out. All technology is existing.

 

[Wes]

Hi, I found a few things that I'd like you to fix - there's a couple empty section where there's nothing between the ==== Header ==== and the next === Header === and also the appearance section needs a written description in addition to the images. Overall this is a good, reasonable submission and nothing particularly stands out as overpowered or problematic.

 

[Talarn]

Wes beat me to it again ...
Basically what he said .. minor clerical issues that can be fixed with a simple typity type type.

These are all so nice and flat ..

 

[Nashoba]

Updated the page and include a compartment list.

 

[Wes]

Would you mind adding the DRv3 data? In particular, for the turrets?

 

[Nashoba]

Don't see the need, given they are pre-existing, but if you want fine

 

[Nashoba]

The weapons have been updated to reflect V2 and V3 damage

 

[Talarn]

@Wes Pssssst.

 

[Wes]

Approved.