Approved Submission [GH] Dualarity Anti-Armour Rifle

[club24]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:gh-w4-1f_dualarity_rifle

Submission Faction(s)

1. Neshaten

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Its a big rifle i wrote a year ago and decided to slap it up and submit it

and yes it has FM approval by myself, the current FM of neshaten at the time of submission

 

[Yuuki]

Oooh, new GH!

 

[Andrew]

I will take this one,

Before we get started on the review, could you please fix the following:

1. Incorrectly Nested Sections

The headers have to be in descending order, and cannot skip levels.

ie.
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If you need any help with this let me know. Once this is fixed I will start reviewing.

 

[club24]

took one off the title line, shouldn't be out of order anymore

 

[Andrew]

I helped you out.

I don't see any other issues with it.

Three Day Approval Timer Applied, Expires 02/22/19 @ 20:10.

 

[club24]

@Andrew sorry to drag you back again but would there be any issue if i bumped this to tier 6? I just realised i grabbed the older version from my onenote

if not I’ll just leave it as is

 

[Andrew]

• I think it is acceptable to put it to Tier 6.
• However, I think that Effective Range: Accurate up to 3000m, maximum projectile range of 4000m should be Effective Range: Accurate up to 2000m, maximum projectile range of 3000m
• The tradeoff increased power for decreased range.

 

[club24]

Sounds good to me, I’ll get it sorted when im done shopping

 

[club24]

edited

 

[Andrew]

Original 3-day timer still applies -

Three Day Approval Timer Applied, Expires 02/22/19 @ 20:10.

 

[club24]

i just realised that you were off on the year there andrew, you approved this thing before i even made it lol

 

[Andrew]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved.