1) "With its operation complete, it can match speed with a fast moving U-1 and reconnect for transport back to a mother ship."
Gumdrop propulsion: 0.05c
U-1 propulsion:
Atmosphere:
Mecha form: Mach 5.2
Fighter form: Mach 6
Zero atmosphere:
Mecha form: .27 C
Fighter form: .32 C
It can't "match speed with a fast moving u-1", can it? I'm a little confused about this. It's slower than standard starship speeds, so how does it match a U-1?
2) "...wheel'd mode..." Do you mean
wheeled mode?
3) "...4 people inside + power armor..." Replace + with
and or
plus.
4) Need text under Craft Systems before sub-headers.
5) "multiple..." under Armor should be capitalized.
6) Anti-grav engines are not represented in the art? No big deal but I'm wondering if they're
inside the craft and it's not spelled out that they are.
7) "four..." under Optical/ Thermal Sensors should be capitalized.
8) "...setup..." should be two words,
set up.
9) "The only non-emergency exit is in the rear of the craft, a single door with a textured walking path leads into the rear area, where there is space for three power armored people and one pilot." This either needs to be two sentences with a break where the first comma is, or you need to say
where in the same spot.
10) YE completed?
11) Center the tier
4, light armor in the chart
12) How is it both a PA carrier and 2 m if the standard power armor on the
size chart is 2.8 meters?