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Approved Character Hatoyama Ume

My only concern is how brief the history is. Any stories or antidotes from her training or birth? anything to make it a bit more exciting?

Past that I like her, and it all looks good. So if you can add a bit more history I'll approver her!
 
Alright well I added in some info explaining her likes and dislikes a bit more and incidents involving them now to expand her history a bit.
 
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