Syaoran Retired Staff Inactive Member Apr 7, 2014 #1 Character Article URL:https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:hatoyama_ume Preferred Plot's GM: @Tanka_001 Ume the neko ready to report for duty on the Soyokaze
Character Article URL:https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:hatoyama_ume Preferred Plot's GM: @Tanka_001 Ume the neko ready to report for duty on the Soyokaze
Yoshi Inactive Member Apr 8, 2014 #2 My only concern is how brief the history is. Any stories or antidotes from her training or birth? anything to make it a bit more exciting? Past that I like her, and it all looks good. So if you can add a bit more history I'll approver her!
My only concern is how brief the history is. Any stories or antidotes from her training or birth? anything to make it a bit more exciting? Past that I like her, and it all looks good. So if you can add a bit more history I'll approver her!
Syaoran Retired Staff Inactive Member Apr 8, 2014 #3 Alright well I added in some info explaining her likes and dislikes a bit more and incidents involving them now to expand her history a bit.
Alright well I added in some info explaining her likes and dislikes a bit more and incidents involving them now to expand her history a bit.