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In any case, I don’t think the civilian model should have sharp claws and fire breath, instead making the scary weapon version be a “bodyguard” edition. You could actually toss on DR for both of those; Tier 1 claws and Tier 2 breath weapon, on a Tier 2 body.
You could probably move the DR under the Internals section. The FARS is the best template to use here, but the FARS doesn't have a weapon so we'll have to bootleg another template. Most of them have weapons towards the top, so it's best to move it near there.
The submitted article is/has…
[ YES ] A very high level of overall quality
[ YES ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ YES ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[ YES ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ ??? ] In the proper format/template
No proper template exists. Used the FARS as a template, with some modification. Followed to the best of ability.
[ YES ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[ YES ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ YES ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ YES ] No red and/or broken links
[ YES ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
Robodragon, lul
[ YES ] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[ NO ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
Stands up to your average knife and handgun. Can't stand up to, you know, an assault rifle. Seems fair.
[ NO ] Obtusely redundant
[ NO ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ NO ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[ NO ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ NO ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ NO ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ NO ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ NO ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ NO ] Lacking Detail
[ NO ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has… [ NO ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
Add in speeds under Damage Ratings
[ YES ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines [ YES ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
Link the year
[ NO ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.