Kylindra
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Approved Character [Hinomaru Sunrises II] Yamada Himeko
- Thread starter Kylindra
- Start date
Hi there and welcome!
A great first start on your first character.
I think there are some areas that can be worked on a little:
A great first start on your first character.
I think there are some areas that can be worked on a little:
- In her history, consider adding something about what type of assignment she was looking for. Maybe some kind of interest in the Colony Fleet program itself.
- Would be nice to know what areas of the sciences she has a deeper interest in; things like xenobiology, xenobotany, would be very helpful in the mission profile for someone coming to HS II.
- In terms of her social connections, you could always use the random generator to create a few names she had interacted with during her initial socialization.
- (optional) if you wanted to flesh out her personality a little, I always recommend Personality Types | 16Personalities cause it helps provide a bit of structure. Up to you though.
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