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I think there are some areas that can be worked on a little:
In her history, consider adding something about what type of assignment she was looking for. Maybe some kind of interest in the Colony Fleet program itself.
Would be nice to know what areas of the sciences she has a deeper interest in; things like xenobiology, xenobotany, would be very helpful in the mission profile for someone coming to HS II.
In terms of her social connections, you could always use the random generator to create a few names she had interacted with during her initial socialization.
(optional) if you wanted to flesh out her personality a little, I always recommend Personality Types | 16Personalities cause it helps provide a bit of structure. Up to you though.
Other than those few things it is a start, a great start. Can't wait to have you join us.