Approved Character [HMS Nemesis] Eilidh Dor-Warad

[HAMnJAM]

Link: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:eilidh_dor-warad

@Gunsight1

(PRONOUNCED AY-LAY)

 

[Gunsight1]

change occupation to Second Lieutenant and write her back story and you should be grand

 

[HAMnJAM]

Fixed the History section and Occupation, try now.

 

[ArsenicJohn]

Should the birth year not be 1774ce?

 

[Gunsight1]

No ensign rank in the royal navy. She would have taken her Lieutenants test and when passed been made to lieutenant.

Second Lieutenant is a position, rather than a rank. acting as the second highest seniority lieutenant after the First Lieutenant, which is the only one that is a rank and a possition

only officer ranks are Midshipman, lieutenant, first lieeutenant, master and commander, post captain, senior post captain

 

[Gunsight1]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:kishargal:ersetu_royal_navy_ranks#officer_ranks for reference


Other than the above mentioned details, I think everything looks in order

 

[HAMnJAM]

Should the birth year not be 1774ce?

She's the young side of thirty, unless that is impossible. I'm not completely excellent in math, and I believe the current year to be 1810ce. Could be wrong.

No ensign rank in the royal navy. She would have taken her Lieutenants test and when passed been made to lieutenant.

Second Lieutenant is a position, rather than a rank. acting as the second highest seniority lieutenant after the First Lieutenant, which is the only one that is a rank and a possition

only officer ranks are Midshipman, lieutenant, first lieeutenant, master and commander, post captain, senior post captain

Fixed that error. Should be golden now, even though every time I say that something goes awry.

 

[Gunsight1]

Current year is 1804 beyond that, everything looks good. Approved!

 

[HAMnJAM]

I'll fix that.