concept looks good I like the non combat direction it's quite refreshing, the character overall I like but there is a couple things to help polish off the article, I'm aware your still pretty new so don't feel bad about having missed any of them.
first off you'll want to link his species aka freespacer to the freespacer article on the wiki in the same way the calendar year is done,
seconds, technically the organization would be Galactic Horizon since thats the group running the whole thing, for placement use this text [[plot:galactic_horizon]] which will link to the plot page for ya ^^
for the rank, since there wont be any real established positions I'd say list his rank as technical crew or you can leave it blank for now too, I'll be posting a rank guide soon in the Interest check thread for those who join with characters who dont already work for the company
aside from that i dont see any major issues with the history and description and such as they can always be expanded on later if needed, so unless any of the other mods have an issue or an important note to bring up the rest of the character is fine
as always if you need help let me know and i'd be happy to fix him up for you ^^