Approved Submission [IIS] Iemochi Personal Security

[Ethereal]

Submission Type: Subsidiary
Template Used: Company
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:iis:personal_security
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:iis:personal_security

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? No
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
A subsidiary of the main IIS branding, dealing with personal and home defence items.

 

[Ametheliana]

It is a good idea to tag @Wes in the thread so he knows to check it over for FM approval.

 

[Ametheliana]

@Wes needed for approval in the thread.

 

[Ethereal]

I'm actually curious because I've heard conflicting reports on whether companies need to be run through NTSE if the FM of the faction they're situated in give it the thumbs up, for future reference

 

[Wes]

Concept FM approved, not do not approve this until WIP stuff is removed and all forced line breaks are removed.

 

[Ethereal]

Removed line breaks and past projects section.

 

[Ametheliana]

Get rid of shape shifting exo-organism\ healing_symbiote that just doesn't sit right with me on multiple levels and not because I'm squeamish but because it is tech that would need its own article imo and because it is way too ambiguous.

If you want to make this product very badly it will need a paragraph or so about what you're talking about <--- my happy medium.

Please take this out of the article or better describe it. Thank you.

 

[Ethereal]

Edited! @Ametheliana

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved