Alright... I'm finally not tired/aching/busy to actually do a review...
Been a bit, hm.
Anyway!
You might wanna fill out your user wikipage. It isn't as much as a requirement then something that gives you bonus points in general, and isn't a requirement for the charrie.
Yamataian females aren't that tall usually, so the taller then average is alright. However... You are at the very maximum height to pilot a Mindy, the staple infantry armor. Thus it would be uncomfortable... You might want to lower it by a bit.
Usually it's best to make the metric measurements in centimeters in this case, though I don't think it particularly matters.
Appearance is really really small... But I'm not going to be anal about it. However, you really ought to lengthen it, put more details and such.
Personality seems quite Neko-ish which is good, actually. However, it doesn't actually describe Haruka past a outer shell. That said, you have the reviewer who is at ease on personality and anal on everything else. It'll do.
History is actually fairly good, surprisingly. Newbie or no you found stuff. :lol: However, it only describes a very bare minimum. You might want to actually describe what she did in her civilian life. Don't worry to much on if it fits with the setting, I'll let ya know... But the civilian stuff really isn't set in any way so you can have a little creative fun with it.
Skills! Yay.
Communication is the usual copy-pasta...
Copy pasta again...
Alright. The non-copy pasta skills really could use a bit more detail... But it'll pass. Barely.
Though this one still isn't approved and left in a state of not-approved-yet. Need to post again in response to stuff, yo ho.