Since this isn't truly a weapon, armor or ship submission, I'll do without the template.
Right now, my key concerns would be 1) The neutrality of the article, as it is done OOC and in a wiki, and 2) the eyebeam lasers. This article is more or less outright bombastic - I suggest the article be made much more neutral and clinical in its grammar; any IC feelings held by the makers and users, I suggest be very subtly and politely implied in the article instead.
As for the eyebeam lasers, I honestly think this should be purely a 'support and logistics' item with no offensive capability like that, limited as it is. The item is already quite superior to what it is replacing, and adding a weapon system into it will just make both the item itself that much more complex. Instead, I suggest making it into a pair of ballistic glasses - give it PDR 2 eye protection capable of taking a handgun bullet or a pair of 00 Buck pellets similar to some eyewear in real life.
Finally, and a completely optional concern of mine; how about the article get fluffed up more? I'd like to see more details about the how, and especially the effects of when it is working - the clothing scan ability is something I'm sure will definitely appeal to a lot of players. Assuming you know what I mean. Detail can't hurt.