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Anything more, Manus? I'm giving this another week before either allowing someone else to take a crack at it, or depositing it in storage at the owner of the company's chosing.
can i make a suggestion? could it also have a Radiation version? basically it has a smaller blast radius but inside that radius when it goes off 1000 Rems of quick dispersal Gamma radiation is released, killing any and all non-shielded biological in the area.
ok i made some changes
i thought it would be nice to have the grenades have an acronym so i added Multi-Use in the name so it can be called the Solanii M.U.R.G.
Anyway i also edited the stats to be different on each version of the grenade. I also added in my idea of a Rad-nade in there. Please comment
Tech Writing Protip: Just because you can, doesn't mean you should. The Astral Vanguard does not like to use weapons that saturate the target in radiation because of environmental and health issues, and the usage of such weaponry would qualify as an atrocity.
... also... why MURG? It sounds kind of uncharacteristic for the Iroma naming scheme.
1. Upload the grenade image to the wiki. Get rid of the photobucket link.
2. Get rid of all the forced line breaks in the article ( \\ ) - use bullet points instead.
3. Add an overview sentence under the title header.
Let me know when you're done so I can move this topic to APPROVED.
I'm still a little reticent on the use of the MURG acronym, and kinda not feeling the relatively barebones header text about how it affects the setting. Yes, it's fun to make up acronyms, but this one is a bit dim sounding.
I was trying to upload it to the Iroma folder.
If the original Rod Grenade name works better then i'll revert it but i changed it to Polymorphic Situation Grenades for right now.