Approved Character Iromakuanhe: Indira Shivali

[Tyler]

Yeah I got bit by the plague too: here's a second character for it.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... ra_shivali

 

[Cora]

Just so you know Tyler. Indara is a male god.

 

[Nashoba]

Okay, here is a pass at this. Overall it looks really good.

Distinguishing Features: General features all Iroma have.

That's not really a distinguishing feature. What makes her stand out from other Iroma's. I've noticed that its not uncommon for Iroma to decorate their horn-like crests with significant symbols. With her back ground it could be that she had her family symbol there, and after what happened with her father, she had it removed, leaving visible mark where it was. Give it a thought.

A few typos in history
receving should be receiving
Terrifed should be Terrified

Overall, I don't see any major issues. Please take care of the items identified.
I will defer to Exhack about the lack of leadership skill.

Character approval is pending the above listed items and approval by Exhack on the Leadership skill item.

 

[Exhack]

A frame runner has to have the Leadership skill marked in the CCG, or an equivalent. If you want to proceed with this skillset, you might as well have kept her as a Field Mechanist.

 

[Tyler]

What would be considered an equivalent?

 

[Exhack]

The 'Leadership' skill with different wording, that effectively conveys that the character has made her qualifications in terms of tactics and leadership training.

All combat characters need it.

 

[Tyler]

Bump for attention. I've corrected skillset issue.

 

[Nashoba]

Since the skill set issue has been resolved.

This Character Is Approved for IC usage.