[Iromakuanhe] Zero-Point Siphon

[Exhack]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ir ... int_siphon

This submission could be considered a sort of total redrafting of the Quantization Furnace, taking certain elements which I liked but also cutting some fat so that the entire thing would be more appealing to reviewers. In a way this is less of a new piece of tech, and more of a re-imagining our much beloved and much-used zero-point power that uses some Iromakuanhe design tropes.

I'll be working on the related Null Entropy Capacitor submission in the near future, so please inform me if it is necessary for the approval of this system.

 

[Nashoba]

This review is for: Zero-Point Siphon (ZeP Siphon)

The submitted article is/has…
[x] A general topic sentence under the title header
[n/a] Artwork (illustrations are strongly encouraged for all spacecraft and handheld items)
[x] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[x] In the proper format/template
[x] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[x] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[X] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[x] No red and/or broken links
[x] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[x] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[x] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[x] Obtusely redundant
[x] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[x] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[x] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[x] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[x] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[x] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[-] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[x] Lacking Detail

The article has…
[x] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[x] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[-] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[x] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.


Summary
Article is missing when this technology became available (Calendar entry)
Article Depends upon another article that is pending.

** Short description of the issue. If a longer explanation is needed, put it in Notes.
Veyrinite is still pending approval, and is a vital component to this tech.

Status: Pending

Notes
This field is for any extra description needed for the issues stated above or (as the name suggests) and additional notes you wish to state in the record regarding the item.

This is an new power system for the Iroma to upgrade from their current system. Have already worked with the submitter on a few items that would have caused more issues.

 

[Nashoba]

Since the Veyrinite article has been approved,

This is now APPROVED.