Approved Submission Ironclass Shipyard/Drydock

[Charmaylarg Dufrain]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:nepleslia:ironclass_shipyard

Submission Faction(s)

1. Nepleslia

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Simple if bare article with a lot omitted from the starship template (it doesnt move, doesnt have weapons or shields, doesnt have a deck layout beyond crew quarters, doesnt have a need for a lot of the interiors that starships have, doesnt have vehicles or hangars, etc.)

This article is not meant to be a playable ship for PCs or anything beyond simple background flavor to have, so is intentionally left minimalist so its purpose is obvious without needing a mountain of pointless text to make the same point. I'm simply trying to fill some gaps that were left when our formerly canon shipyards and other such articles were taken off the wiki by ligma and uso without needing to make a 30,000-word article for something simple.

 

[Whisper]

Disappointingly small.

Kidding! I love background fluff stuff. If no one else claims it during its 3 day resting period, I'll take it on.

 

[Whisper]

Hey Char!

Made a few updates. Overall it looks solid, but there's a few sections that immediately go into other sections. The site's style guide says to "Follow all section headers with text (not images, lists, or tables)."

When you've finished adding that in, let me know and I'll wrap this up for you.

- Whisper

 

[Charmaylarg Dufrain]

added text to section headers that before had none~

 

[Whisper]

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved! Thanks for making those additions, Char!