Approved Character Isaak Moltolav Sutuk (Dr. Twitch)

[phacon]

Issak Moltolav Sutuk is Dr. Tran!!!!

...

I mean Dr. Twich ( ^_-;; )

Anyways I made a character for the new Gargaten plot ;3

need to still grammar check probably one more time. However, here it is:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:dr_twitch

P.S. For those of you didn't get the Dr. Tran joke look it up on youtube ^_-

 

[Ira]

Looks good for the most part. Very detailed history, which I like. I know English is not your first language, but spell check.

Also you get two more skills, and you should detail them a bit more.

Other then that the character is looking good.

 

[phacon]

Looks good for the most part. Very detailed history, which I like. I know English is not your first language, but spell check.

Also you get two more skills, and you should detail them a bit more.

Other then that the character is looking good.

I am saving those two still for later possible development as the storyline grows ^_-

English actually is my first language. I just finished my 2 of 3 grammar checks. ^^;

 

[Doshii Jun]

Looks good for the most part. Very detailed history, which I like. I know English is not your first language, but spell check.

Also you get two more skills, and you should detail them a bit more.

Other then that the character is looking good.

I am saving those two still for later possible development as the storyline grows ^_-;

As the storyline grows, you can simply add more skills. You don't need to keep them open.

 

[Ira]

I corrected some grammar errors in the article. Your additional skills are acceptable.

The character set up looks good, I know you have a hard time with grammar, this character has my blessing so I leave passing of this article in the hands of the Sarp Gods.

May they have mercy on your soul.

 

[Wes]

Approved based on FM recommendation.