Approved Character [ISC Phoenix Vol. 2] Redrick 'Red' Callahan

[Born-On-Board]

Character Article: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:redrick_callahan
Preferred Plot's GM: @Luca

Alright man, let me know if I messed up anything significant. Review, Rate, Criticize and Correct at your leisure, please, and I will carry out any corrections that need to be made post-haste.

 

[Luca]

Understood and Received, going to take a look after I get some Z's.

 

[Born-On-Board]

Roger dodger. Thanks in advance.

 

[Luca]

Alright, here's what I can see:

• As discussed before, The Spanish Main and Barbary Pirates do not exist because Earth does not exist in SARP (maybe). Good to see you've removed those.

“Jesus wept, y'all act like staring at a damn radar screen is somethin' special. Get out of the chair, lessee if ol' Red's still got it!”

• Also, Jesus does not exist either (maybe). A viable alternative is Lewis Pasco, or Chiharu if he knows of the Yamataian semi-pantheon.
  
• Fixed how your inventory is laid out. The formatting is now displaying properly.
• Also, he hadn't quite gotten Shanghai'd per say. He was on a perfectly peaceful ship and was doing a good, legitimate job feeding a convention of Yui-fearing, tax paying hedonists. Until those godless Pirates showed up and put you under siege, that is.

I'd say you're ready to go and Approved once that's addressed. We'll keep in touch via IRC.