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Approved Character [ISC Phoenix - Volume 2] - Cassandra Cassiopeia

Alright, I've taken a look and fixed what formatting I can and added links, but here is the following that requires your intervention to fix up:
  • You need to create a player page. This is important for keeping a track of all of the things you've made: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=members:lunar_rabbit
  • Use some Generic/Anonymous Character Art for now. Copy the code into the large space in the statistics box. https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=anonymous_character_art
  • Cass seems to be missing measurements. Her weight is also a little odd: Is she 140 kilograms or 140 pounds?
  • You're also missing a " on the end of 6'1".
  • Cass is also missing any distinct features. Maybe her feature is that she is indistinct? Surely an opera singer would have a distinct voice and an excellent vocal range. Does she sing Soprano? Mezzo-soprano? Contralto?
  • On Finance, your character's starting Rank on the Phoenix would be 3-Spades.
This character is pending, and should be good to go otherwise when fixes are applied.
 
Alright, I've taken another look and you've addressed everything - I moved the picture to its rightful place, broke up the skills further to make them easier to read, and after another cursory glance and a look at your history, I can determine that this character is good to go and Approved. Now, make your way to the ISC Phoenix Volume II and introduce yourself - we're at the airport!

I'll put your character into the Wiki page roster...
 
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