Approved Character [ISC Phoenix - Volume 2] Lodemucker Five-four 54-0506-2301

[Primitive Polygon]

Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:lodemucker_five-four_54-0506-2301
Preferred Plot's GM: @Luca

Couple of things missing, like secondary preferred plots, items, and payroll stuff, but honestly this character is so goofy and weird that I think it's worth letting peeps have a look-in before I get much further. If the preferred plot changes, I'd probably do a bit of a re-write anyhow.

Criticisms welcome. ;I

 

[Luca]

I've had a look at the biography and gone over it with @Primitive Polygon over the IRC and I've determined that so far, it's good to go save for removing the ':3' on the Demolition skill and adding some items in addition to some typographical errors and a location for the later part of their Pre-RP History. Once those are done, I'd be happy to approve and move along.

 

[Primitive Polygon]

Seems like everything should be done now. Just finished;

-Pre-RP history specifics, with a little more clear motivations.
-Removing smiles. :/
-Changed the communications skill to include some machine languages.
-Items!
-Finances.

Edit; Just for the record, added a few more last minute things. New art. Fixed some minor things like the likes and dislikes since I'm getting more in tune with the personality now.

 

[Luca]

Alright then, with a smile and a big thumbs up, I approve wholeheartedly of Lodemucker's entrance onto the ISC Phoenix Vol. II.

I'd like to note that the amount of effort you've put into the character art, concepts and ideas shows your enthusiasm and your verve. I can't ever ignore that from a player. You've impressed me! Give yourself a pat on the back, @Primitive Polygon !