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I looked it over again and it seemed pretty decent expect for some word usage errors (You consistently use "it's" {it is} when you mean "its" and used "get use to" when you meant "get used to"). I thought the personality archetype is a little weird and I don't see how wanting revenge makes anyone better at being an agent.
Since Andrew runs SAINT and Tomoe runs YC-28, I'm going to let one of them make the call.
hmm good point... Let's see what they say. I would say his vindictive nature verges more on the fanatic level as well as his loyalty to the empire because of the new body... Maybe not a better agent but definately a loyal one.