Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:ji_xa_bright_seurik_lmanel
Preferred Plot's GM: @Luca
Preferred Plot's GM: @Luca
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Approved Character Ji'xa "Bright" Seurik Lmanel
- Thread starter Semjax
- Start date
Hi @Semjax,
Good to see you've submitted your character, here's some issues I can see though, nothing serious:
That's all I can think of for now, the rest looks good to me.
Good to see you've submitted your character, here's some issues I can see though, nothing serious:
- You're going to need some anonymous Lorath art. Put this in just between the Character Header and their Species:
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{{:lorath:lorath_uniform_anonymous_01.png|}}- What causes Ji'xa to have such tired eyes? Does she stay up all night building robots, perhaps trying to build an army? (Rise my minions!) Or does she stay up all evening playing video games or looking at pictures of kittens?
- Typical ears for a Lmanel Lorath are slightly pointed ears, kind of like an elf's by default. They also take on traits of your character's aspectation, so you'd have wolf's ears. Fuzzy and oh-so-cute!
- Does Ji'xa remain in contact with Ul'ta after Basic Training and mentorship? I imagine the two would have a very strong bond.
- Would she have bought a handful of her inventions with her, or maybe a datapad full of schematics so she can build them again wherever she goes?
That's all I can think of for now, the rest looks good to me.
Alright I have:
- Put the Lorath Art up.
- Explained why Jiji has such tired eyes.
- Gave her an adorable description for her ears.
- Explained at the end of the Pre-RP history that she does keep in contact with Ul'ta and her father as well.
- Gave her DOLL-3 and a Water Purifier as inventions that were brought with her when she was assigned. Along with a proper description, as well as a data pad with her known schematics on it.
