Approved Character Jordan Jane Simmons

ShotJon

Well-Known Member

• Feb 7, 2011

• #1

Character for upcoming Fian plot. I still have to work out money and things like flat, but I will discuss that with Fian later. But I though that Char mods could have a look first.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:jordan_jane_simmons

 

Aendri

Inactive Member

• Feb 11, 2011

• #2

Looks mostly good to me. I'd run it through word if you would, just to pick up the spelling and grammar, and I'd like Fian to put his word in on it, but it looks like you're pretty much done.

Oh, and I fixed your guns code for you.

 

ShotJon

Well-Known Member

• Feb 11, 2011

• #3

Thanks. And I will do so soonish.

 

Fian

Well-Known Member

• Mar 5, 2011

• #4

This is fine.

 

Aendri

Inactive Member

• Mar 7, 2011

• #5

Approved, since all the changes have been made and Fianapproval has been given.

 

ShotJon

Well-Known Member

• Mar 7, 2011

• #6

Thanks for all.