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Approved Character Kage Yaichiro

Toshiro

Inactive Member
Wiki: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=kage_yaichiro


It has been stated to me that though Yuki Toshiro and the Yggdrasill have potential, that I should assume a character of rank within the Star Army of Yamatai before an original civilian to further familiarize myself with the world of Star Army before doing major things with him. This character is designed to teach me how Star Army works, and be enjoyable to play after that has been done. This application is NOT an abandonment of Yuki Toshiro. With that said...

Name: Kage Yaichiro

General Information

Species: Yamataian
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Family (or Creators): Original (Hikari Yuji) Born in YE 10 to Hikari Shigeru and Hikari Ryoko. Yaichiro was created from Hikari Yuji's ST data in late YE 29.
Employer: Star Army
Occupation: Chief Engineer
Rank: Santo Juni
Current Assignment: Pisces Star Fortress, Formerly Gemini Star Fortress, YSS Sakura NG-X1-360

Physical Characteristics

Height: 6' 1â€
 
Odds are that if Kage made it into the Star Army, he should have been trained to bring his skill total to 7.
 
Ah, okay then, I'll think about what others skills would suit him...maybe I'll give him survival and cooking skills...

Any other issues while I'm working on that?
 
I didn't think that people were allowed to ST someone until they're reasonable sure that he's dead. Not going to die, dead. (To avoid this kind of incident, of course.)

But I like your character concept. Let's see what Wes has to say about this...
 
It was an effort to maintain a level of originality and depth without making the character too difficult for a starter to play right off the bat.
 
Approved.
 
Wait wait wait. He's missing Communications. He'll need to replace one of the char's skills with Comm.
 
I think I'd be a good move to change the wording in bits and places, as they seem to depend on things other than the character's background. There's a culinary reference to Hanako and a reference to how service on the Sakura could change the character as well. While I understand the points brought, I think it would do well to have them be stand-alone.
 
Yangfan said:
Wait wait wait. He's missing Communications. He'll need to replace one of the char's skills with Comm.
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Just to make things simple, I'm giving my permission foro him to have an extra starting skill area. That way, he won't have to replace anything.
 
Edited to include Communications skills, removed references to YSS Sakura (other than "Assignment") and Hanako.
 
Week 15

7326 KS
+100 KS

7426 KS

Removed Culinary Skills to bring skills down to 7 and eliminate inconsistencies.
 
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