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Approved Character Kai Nakamura~5th edit~

Kai

Retired Staff
Name: Kai Nakamura


General Information

Species: Yamataian
Gender: Male
Age: 17

Family / Creators: Civilian family that is now estranged. They were too "boringâ€
 
May I suggest you use spell check, which is at the bottom of your posting bit, or firefox to spell check it? Also, I GREATLY suggest you start using shift.

Also, Flesh out some stuff. All those descriptive/anything that can be long things should be... say... 2-5 lines. Somewhere in that range. Never hurts to be descriptive, always hurts to not.
 
How does someone who is prone to lose their concentration not lose sight of goals? Are these long-range goals? If so, what are they?
 
About his height - you put him down as 6'2" and as combat arms - but that's too tall to fit in the standard power armors so he'd have to be planetary infantry and right now there's no plots with planet-side campaigns (basically everyone is on starships). Just a heads up before I approve it.
 
very confused as to where and how to post it.. i'm not that good with webpages...
 
Go to List of Notable Characters, hit 'Edit this Page' up at the top, and add '* [[Nakamura Kai]]' to the appropriate spot, alphabetically. Then, after you save the page, his name will be there as a red link. Click the link, hit 'Create this Page,' and paste his bio into the form that comes up. You'll need to do some editing to make it look right, but you can look at other characters' bios for examples; just go to them and hit 'Edit this Page' to see the formatting code. This is a pretty basic and simple example.
 
I updated the New Players' Guide with steps on how to add the pages to the wiki.
 
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