This review is for: ke-m6-w3406 Daisy Multipurpose Plasma Weapon
The submitted article is/has…
[ x ] A very high level of overall quality
[ x ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[ x ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ x ] In the proper format/template
[ x ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[ x ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ x ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ x ] No red and/or broken links
[ x ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[ x ] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[ x ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[ x ] Obtusely redundant
[ x ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ x ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[ x ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ x ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ x ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ x ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ x ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ x ] Lacking Detail
[ x ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[ x ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ x ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ x ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ x ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
** Excellent article, Kai. It's perfect.
Status: Approved.