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Approved Submission [KGR] DSR-75C Dual Stage Rail Carbine

Arieg

DEFCON Everybody Dies
Submission Type: Small Arm
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=kgr:viper

Faction: Sesestran Colonial Union
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: The ammunition is still a work in progress but I'm curious if this adaption of the weapons template and this style of weapon will fly by NTSE standards.
 
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To start, please break up the initial paragraph by placing more of the text below the image and into smaller paragraphs.

I don't think there's anything wrong with the basic science of the gun, but I'd like to know where the magazine actually is, and how the motorized feed system is powered.
 
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