Approved Character Kinezemi Yayu "Katte"

[Fay]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... u_kinezumi

I just wanted to get this finished and up here before I leave. All that was left to do was the History anyways, so I quickly thought something up. I'll answer any questions that may come up when I get back.

 

[Doshii Jun]

1. On Build and Skin Color: "Curved" and "lanky" don't go together. You're one or the other; this one is probably the latter.

2. Where is her strange NH-29 tattoo, and why is it faded? Where did it come from?

3. And why the tail?

Overall: An interesting, if annoying-sounding character. But as expected, well-written and clearly thought-out.

This character is pending.

 

[Fay]

1. Oops. I wrote her description around 2 in the morning out of an inspiration. Must've crossed two many hairs in my brain or something. :lol: That's a hard choice to make... both are appealing for this character type. However, I believe that curvy will go better with the race and name. I know quite a few acrobatic gals that are curvy... probably due to the acrobatics. ^_^

2. Hm... from this prefabricated NH-29 character, they appear to have an assembly line tattoo like that. It's faded because she doesn't like tattoos or the thought of being someone's 'commodity'... other then Matte's, of course.

3. OOCly, something different. *ponders* Ah, the main IC reason was going to be in her history, but I forgot to add it. *fixes*

 

[Doshii Jun]

This character is approved for IC usage, despite the tail.