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Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) Kotoku I (also needs approving)
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Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) Initially Added by Wes on 04, 16 2014 at 16:01.
The station that was there at YE 34, that he installed. It's his personal demesne? Is it his capital? If he hid it and waited out the various wars/national changes, shouldn't the station be named (and be somewhat legendary)?
(Nitpicking): Can you break up the "The New Dukedom" paragraph? Wall of texts are hard to read.
(Lore): Peerage is conveyed through "prowess" - the Duke was recognized by the Mikado. Fun fact; the marriage thing you mention here might make sense, considering the lifespan of elves (it would be a long term clan/house alliance), but they wouldn't necessarily gain rank from there. Probably favors though. Might be fun to explore.
(Definition): mollified the citizens of Kotoku I, who now felt the duke would hear their need" (Do you mean "Unified"? Freudian slip because of polygamy? This Duke dude gets AROUND amirite).
Beyond those things, as a system article, I can say that the content here is generally in keeping with what I understand to be what's necessary for the Baba Yaga plot to utilize it.