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Approved Character Kvasir

Kvasir

Inactive Member
Name: Kvasir


General Information

Species: Lorath
Gender: Male
Age: 35

Family / Creators:

Employer:
Occupation: Computer Systems Officer
Rank: Officer
Current Assignment: Maintaining Constant Communication


Physical Characteristics

Height: 5 foot 11 inches
Weight: 145lbs
Measurements:
Bra Size: N/A

Build and Skin Colour: Tan with a rather skinny build
Facial Features and Eye Colour: Bright blue eyes and no facial hair
Hair Colour and Style: Long silky maroon

Distinguishing Features: small scar on his right arm from a slip up while building a computer


Psychological Characteristics

Personality:
Kvasir loves to be surrounded by computers and playing chess. He wears a casual uniform along with his favorite hat. The fear of being thrown over board, and showing everone that he is good, he is constantly working as hard as he can. He is known for going without food and sleep for days trying to get something done, weather it is important or not.

Likes: Writing, building computers, and reading
Dislikes: Noisy groups of people
Goals: Wants to be accepted by his superiors


History

Kvasir was born after the PNUgen-created plague and jumped from ship to ship since YE08. Eventual started to tag along with the Star Army Fleet.


Skills

Communications: Your character is familiar with basic radio operation and procedures and can make transmissions to and receive transmissions from other characters through headsets, starships, power armor, and shuttles in both combat and non-combat conditions. Your character is fluent in English, (and if a Nekovalkyrja, Japanese). He can speak and write both correctly and efficiently and can write reports, fill forms, issue orders under fire, etc.

Knowledge: History, law, reference, memory

Maintenance and Repair: The skill needed by a technician and/or mechanic

Mathematics: Your character received basic mathematics training, to including up to algebra and trigonometry.

Starship Operations: Astrometrics, stellar cartography, navigation, helm, etc.

Technology Operation: Your character is capable of operating any computer system that uses the Kessaku OS, found on all Star Army starships. He is proficient in entering and/or searching for information.

Fighting: Your character received hand-to-hand combat training, followed up with a rigorous training program. He is skilled and experienced in combat both in Yamatai-like conditions and in zero-gravity, with and without weapons. Weapons he is trained in include energy pistols, knives, and power armor.
 
Let me know when you're done.

Main problems so far:
-What does a Lorath have to do with Yamatai's great plague?
-Skills are just copy-pasted, not even with the character's name changed
 
More so, why is this Lorath apart of the YSE?

The Lorath were only recently discovered. ~_~
 
Nope, no where close to being approved. You don't even have the name right.

Not to mention, no mention what so ever of the house he comes from, the correct skills for the house (Which I need to reformat tonight), The history is completely wrong, the skin tone is wrong. You have a long ways to go. If you are still around, please contact either myself, DocTomoe, or Cora. One of us can most certainly help you refine this character.
 
Yes, this does seem to be a little rushed. Some more research into the Lorath may be helpful to know what kind of history your character will have.

Lorath information thread - https://stararmy.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=1859

A bulk of RP'ed out Lorath ecounters can be found here -
https://stararmy.com/forums/viewforum.php?f=1

Currently, it has been less than an IC month that the Lorath have been part of the Yamatai Star Empire, thus it would be impossible for a Lorath to have been on Yamatai during the year YE08. Also, the age of your Lorath indicates he is at a teenage stage of development (Lorath live to be 200+ years of age, so take normal human years, and divide by 2.).

From what I see here, this character would be most well suited for the Occhesta house, the genetic branch of the Lorath whom are focused around intelect.

But honestly, this post does seem a little rushed... take your time and do some research, we'd be glad to help you out as long as you're willing to take the time.
 
Ok. I got in touch with him, spoke to him about the Lorath, and he said he would revise it, a while ago. I am requesting this profile be taken down, He isn't putting any effort into it.
 
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