Approved Character Laeliel

[Itkatsu Kiyoko]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:laeliel

My new character for Luca's ISC Pheonix plot.

Long history is long, though it's mainly historic events that needed to be included to give readers an understanding of what she's lived through and how she got to be where she is.

Have at it.

 

[Kim]

One observational note- you might want to consider adding a description of her wings. =) Does she dye them? Does she bind them? are they just white?

This character is approved for ic-usage.

 

[Itkatsu Kiyoko]

"Her wings are a pure white when clean – though they often are not – and at full extension the distance between her wingtips is a little over three and a half times the width of her shoulders."

"Tanktop with velcro-tipped tightening straps, used to bind her wings up against her back;"

They were already described

 

[Kim]

I must've missed it somehow. =) All right then. lol.

 

[Luca]

It'll be interesting having another Non-Combatant character on board!

(I've been doing a lot of discussing with Dave. It's all in good shape. We've a plan to put her in.)

I APPROVE IT!

 

[MissingNo]

Luca, it looks like your avatar is yelling "I approve it!" while covered in blood. Rather creepy, with the wild-eyed gaze 'n all. I like his enthusiasm, though!