I'll take the review from here, Kai.
Along with the word-errors stated by Kai, it seems that most of your skills are rather bare. Can you elaborate more on them? Also, I know you already know this: But you can have seven skills. I think I know where you're going with the character, so I'm just pointing it out out of habit.
History seems fine.
I noticed he has a flask of Whiskey with him. Isn't he an Alcoholic? I thought he would have more of the stuff with him.
Also, for the Personality, you said he was timid and quiet. So why is he violent when drunk? Is he releasing repressed anger? I ask this out of more curiosity than anything.
No other problems that I can catch. I'll do the review checklist tomorrow to give you a chance to make any changes you want to make.