Allright, let's see what we got...
Besides not having an Inventory, my only problem lies with the skills. They are far too broad, and don't really state how he got them, other than he has them.
Give a little more in that area, such as, where he got them. Using "most", "any" , in nigh every skill is a bit broad, and would suggest he's come in contact with nearly every piece of equipment in the galaxy.
Add an inventory, and fix that up, and from a GM standpoint, it will be approved.
- Thanks for Reading
- Sham