Aendri, its an item submission, not a templated submission. There is no format, only formal requirements.
And no, the bullet suggestion makes no sodding sense:
That one sentence not only describes the relationship between the two but also their costing. And its only two objects, so it doesn't REQUIRE bullet-points: In formal design, basic english (you learn this stuff at school) and basic common sense, bullet-points are for concatenated lists of three or more items with no mated descriptors.
This HAS a MATED DEPENDANT DESCRIPTOR AND ITS ONLY TWO.
Its like this, if we imagine someone knows nothing about guns:
Typically when buying a weapon, a customer has to buy the weapon itself (x amount) and the ammunition (y amount) which the gun shoots.
vs
Typically when buying a weapon, a customer has to buy...
- the weapon itself (x amount)
- and the ammunition (y amount)
The gun needs the ammunition in order to fire.
Its a document, not a power-point presentation!
This isn't about comprehension or accessibility, its about subjective preference.
It feels so much like stalling for time or being led around in circles.
Cadet has very sensitive demands for article aesthetics. He's anal about which kinds of headers get used and how information is depicted instead of how it is communicated. On an article that has no template.
This is sweating small stuff that is in the context of the submission, meaningless shit, causing delays and i have a plot where this is needed by players coming up very soon.
This is pedantic, asanine and frivolous.
Here, let's try this: Is this article...
1: Understandable and accessible by players
2: Suitable for the setting and gameplay
3: Backed up by past submissions, events and properly referenced
4: Scientifically plausable
Bullet points and headers don't change 1: Good writing and basic organisation do.
When I see you asking for formatting changes, this is what goes through my head:
"ARE YOU TELLING ME YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS ARTICLE, MERITING CHANGES THAT WILL HELP YOU UNDERSTAND THIS ARTICLE?
WILL BULLET-POINTS, HEADERS AND LAYOUT CHANGES ENHANCE YOUR UNDERSTANDING OF THE RAW TEXT OF THE ARTICLE ITSELF?"
Its a wiki, not a newspaper. There are thousands of articles with formatting
*FAR* worse than mine. This isn't stuff people care about and it gets even worse when timezones factor into things and most of us get a response out of you maybe once every few days, meaning making progress and moving forward is very slow.
And that slowness becomes enraging when what you're asking us to do is shit that is literally of zero importance.
We are not a news paper.
Also, for the seventh time, we have no template for special items or technologies. We can't by definition because those articles differ so enormously that we'd need like seven templates each by their very definition.
<Luca> He's the reason I'm not putting the Val'ta anywhere near the NTSE
Jimmy feels exactly the same way.
Cadet, you have a problem.
I know other players who wait with bigger submissions for you to become inactive specifically so someone else responds to them first. Dealing with you as a mod for some people is like gargling nails.
You need to get your act together.
I really do like you as a person. I'm not bullshitting. That's why I'm getting so messed up over this.
All we need is for you to just do your job. Nothing more. Nothing less. 90% of the time you're great, but the 10% is something that makes anyone just wanting to get the fuck on with their stories want to rip their hair out.
Work with us, not against us.
Please.