M3 Gekido/Fury

This review is for: M3

The submitted article is/has…
[x] A very high level of overall quality
[x] A general topic sentence under the title header
[x] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[x] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[x] In the proper format/template
[x] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[x] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[x] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[x] No red and/or broken links
[x] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[x] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[OK] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[OK] Obtusely redundant
[OK] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[OK] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[OK] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[OK] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[OK] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[OK] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[SEE NOTES] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ --- Power Supply Fuel NOT IN COMPLIANCE] Lacking Detail
[x] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[OK] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[OK] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[OK] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[OK] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.


Summary
Note here if any serious issues are present. These are the issues that will hold up approval.
** See Notes

Status: Pending

Notes
Fuel supply for the CRUSH and BURST need to be quantified. How much fuel are they carrying? How long can they power the frame?

I noticed the following as well....UNAPPROVED SUB=ARTICLES

Why did you not list these with your submission?

Medium Pulsed Plasma Cannon

Semi Gauss Torpedo Launcher - Being reviewed by Kyle

Frame Utility Tool - Incomplete

Gravimagnetic Vibrosword - Incomplete

Advanced Armor Packs - Incomplete

Enhanced Mobility System - Incomplete

Multipurpose Articulated Grip System

CECS - Is not marked unapproved, do not see it approved via forums.



I intend to finish this review by: PENDING YOUR CHANGES

I wish to point out that the Semi Gauss torp thingy is currently being reviewed by Kyle as a separate submission.

Noted.

Alright, sorry for the delay here:

I don't think I can quantify the fuel, nor do I feel comfortable just randomly coming up with an amount it carries in tanks, but what I can do is define the operating time a bit more - I'm not a nuclear physicist, so I can't figure out how much fuel for the reactors it'd need, so I only added details to the BURST's operating time, and also edited the range.

For the "Accessories" portion of the article, I moved into the OOC Notes section for use at a later date. I originally put it there with the intent of eventually finishing the page and the articles within it, not approving it alongside the M3. That is intended to be approved separately - that was my mistake putting it in there so early.

As for the CECS, it was approved as part of the FATE article in the link here.

Besides these, are there any other things I need to address?

The following are Approved:

Main Article
M3 Gekido

Sub-Articles
Origin Standard Frame Cockpit
Standard Frame Control Harness
UV Laser Node
Mutipurpose Articulated Grip System

All other subarticles must be submitted for review at a later date. Quantification of fuel/running time has been corrected to compliance levels.