zephyrite
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Approved Character Meli 00-7909-4884
- Thread starter zephyrite
- Start date
SUBLIMEinal
Well-Known Member
A good character, in my opinion. Sorry for letting it languish here for so long 
Anyway, it strikes me as somewhat odd that she'd be wanting to join the Navy. If she's been training herself for combat, and got cybernetics for it, it seems a lot more like she's shooting for a position in the Marines.
Also, keep in mind that there's not a major amount for Naval personnel to do in most of our plots. The marines are a huge majority for our playerbase, and history hasn't been kind to non-GM Naval PCs. Just ask Tyler or (should he ever care to reappear) Abwerhan Commander about how their non-marine characters played out.
Other than that and a couple minor spelling errors, this looks fine, although I once again heartily recommend the Marine Corps. Either way, I give this my stamp of approval, for whatever it's worth.
Anyway, it strikes me as somewhat odd that she'd be wanting to join the Navy. If she's been training herself for combat, and got cybernetics for it, it seems a lot more like she's shooting for a position in the Marines.
Also, keep in mind that there's not a major amount for Naval personnel to do in most of our plots. The marines are a huge majority for our playerbase, and history hasn't been kind to non-GM Naval PCs. Just ask Tyler or (should he ever care to reappear) Abwerhan Commander about how their non-marine characters played out.
Other than that and a couple minor spelling errors, this looks fine, although I once again heartily recommend the Marine Corps. Either way, I give this my stamp of approval, for whatever it's worth.
SUBLIMEinal
Well-Known Member
Um, anyone on this? It's all ready for approval in my book.
I missed that line in your reply, Sub. Sorry.
This character is approved for IC usage.
This character is approved for IC usage.
