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Approved Character Method Nine Five

Alright, well, despite my past unsureness, I'm going to give your character a look over. LET THE (BLOOD) TRIALS BEGIN!!!

1) Either change 'devious' in the Eye Color to 'deviously' or add a comma right after it. This is just me being picky on grammar, but so far, it is the only thing I've noticed.

2) Yes, some of your skills could use some fleshing out. What kind of roles in Starship Operation does she excel at? What kind does she not do so well?

3) In Engineering, maybe give us details like if she has success or failure in the construction of robots.

4) Does she know the Nepleslian tongue? That might be a good addition to her Communications skill... especially if she is going on the Cirrus.

5) Maybe Construction can kind of tie into Engineering? In Engineering, she can be a good planner at building the robots, but Construction allows her to actually -build- them. Do you understand what I mean?

6) She needs an inventory. At least a Nepleslian one, for the most part, with some customization for her Freespacer needs.

Overall: This character is great. I can't wait to see her in action!

Character pending on the discussion and changes above. Keep up the good work!
 
There is nothing wrong with this character from the perspective of it being a Freespacer. If you'd like to write how she came to be in the service of the Nepleslian military in the pre-roleplay section that'd be cool, but if not, whatever. She looks like a fairly average "I'm not an average person, lolz" Deoradh, so:

This character is just a-okay for being a Freespacer.

(that's kind of like my FM stamp of approval)
 
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