I'd like to know why she has a cheerful disposition, and yet is generally unhappy since she has little to no history.
A specification on if she's a born NH-29 youngling or a created NH-29 would be a nice detail to add.
Any particular good reason for her odd color scheme? Although NH-29 nekos can customize the look of their younglings (if Mihana was born that way), they tend to be standardized a bit - it's generally recommended not to have them stand out (though you certainly can if you
really want it) - I find the different eye color is especially peculiar.
Furthermore, there is no mention of whom concieved her, nor is there any input on her affiliation. Even if we have a caretaker occupation, this does not confirm she is part of the Star Army - sedentary NH-29s are quite possible, but might be a bit boring to play if they stay inside the comforts of their own nests! XD
You currently have 5 skills, which is appropriate for normal characters, but characters in the Star Army get training for seven of them. If that's the case for Mihana, then, you might want to correct it (though you'll probably have to juggle skills around since the army has prerequisites).
The Star Army
is recommended to beginning players, especially nekovalkyrja, since it's the best developped and most supported organisation in the Star Army roleplay (though you may have suspected so from the name ~_^ )
If you have some problems with the character sheet layout, try
this out. It's a form one of our players made for us and you'll probably find it very useful: it'll do most of the formatting work for you.
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