Character Name: Motoyama Kaori
Species: Geshrin
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Creator/Parents: Takiko Kaori & Hitomi Kaori
Faction: Star Army
Occupation: Starship Operations
Rank: SantΓ΄ Hei
Current Assignment: To Be Given
Hair color and Style: Short White
Build and Skin Color: Muscular/Flesh
Face and Eye Color:Flesh/Gray
Distinguishing Features: Scar across right side of face.
Personality: He is a rather militaristic man. He grew up knowing one day what he would do for a living. If one can get past the rough outside they can find a different man inside. He always thinks, before he speaks...a strategist at heart.
Likes: Starships, Being in Space, Commanding, Winning
Dislikes: Pirates, Sweet Potatoes, Losing, Those who oppose the Star Army
Goals: To bring Pride to the Star Army, and to show his worth to them.
Class: Strategist
Skills:
Language: Geshrin 5
Strategist Skills
Astronavigation 4
Weapons: Starships 4
Tactics 4
Starship Operation
Astronavigation 3
Computer Operations 3
History: Star Army 3
Math, Advanced 3
Starship Shields 3
Childhood Skills
Martial Arts 4
Leadership 4
Diplomacy 4
Special Ablilties
Quick Reference 5
History:
He was a young child who travled often with his parents. He enjoyed their company up until age 10, when the ship they were on was attacked by pirates. He watched as they came in, and killed people. His parents caught in the massacre, left their blood upon his face. He held his mother as he cried, horror stricken tears in panic.
A Man approached, wearing a white uniform. He looked up and blinked the tears away. "Son, Come with me...I'm sorry for your family." The man was from the Star Army, and had stopped the killing before it got too far...but if only they had stopped it earlier. Looking up to that man, he had a goal, he himself would join the Star Army.
His plans: to use the Star Army in his own way, to stop the death of innocents....by the greedy.
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