Motoyoshi Hanei Kaisha Uniforms

[Andrew]

Submission Type: Employee Uniforms
Submission URL: MHK Uniforms on Star Army Space Roleplay
Faction: YSE / MHK
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) Yes, Me.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) No.
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) No.

Notes: Uniforms will get art once I can afford the commission.

 

[raz]

Even though you say FM approved by you, it's still a Yamatai subset, as indicated by its place in the namespace. So doesn't that mean it needs are prior to approval per the Yamatai policy on these things?

Other than that it doesn't seem objectionable. Uniforms! Woo!

 

[Wes]

Can you give us a rough diagram to show us what the uniform looks like?

Maybe use one of these pixel art templates?

 

[Andrew]

@Wes, Try not to laugh too hard



I am a horrible artist when it comes to non-DOGA/easy art stuff.

 

[Wes]

This is not going to stop it from being approved, but are you sure you want your mens' pants to be form fitting like a bodysuit? Have you considered that having the men in tight pants are going to make their "package" really obvious looking?



I'm just saying...

 

[Nashoba]

Argh my eyes.... unless they are supposed to be running around looking like superheroes in tights... just say no....

 

[Andrew]

I think Im going to give the men more of a cargo style pant... *cover eyes*

 

[raz]

Make sure they wear briefs, though, to maintain the bulge.

 

[Andrew]

Edited....

 

[Andrew]

Sketches updated and put in wiki

 

[Andrew]

Any issues with these?

 

[Andrew]

Fixed Male uniform per IRC discussion with Nash.

 

[Ira]

Well, Overall the article looks good!

BUT

I saw two things that made the Ira-spot twitch.

This latex suit has an SP value. Why?

In the overhead text I detected use of "bombastic language" which I was told to take great care in not using.

 

[Andrew]

Changed the SP to 0, Boombastic language removed.

 

[Nashoba]

Approved.