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Approved Character Mu'Tasim Farouk
- Thread starter Kokuten
- Start date
I'm not an authority on the Iromakuanhe
But here are a few things I found.
Birth and Almost Booms
Missing apostrophe
the boys strange should be the boy's strange
Skills,
Fighting
Red link for Faelraig
[[romakuanhe:laiz_faelraig|Faelraig]] missing the i at the beginning
Medical
comerades should be comrades
Humanities
it's should be its it's is the contraction for it is
But here are a few things I found.
Birth and Almost Booms
Missing apostrophe
the boys strange should be the boy's strange
Skills,
Fighting
Red link for Faelraig
[[romakuanhe:laiz_faelraig|Faelraig]] missing the i at the beginning
Medical
comerades should be comrades
Humanities
it's should be its it's is the contraction for it is
Exhack
Inactive Member
I had reviewed this extensively as it was being written, and found it up to par and consistent with the Iroma part of the setting. I only wanted another reviewer to impartially check for personality and history inconsistencies and spelling errors, since I thought I liked the character too much.
That said, it meets the grade.
This character is approved for IC usage.
That said, it meets the grade.
This character is approved for IC usage.
