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Approved Character Mu'Tasim Farouk

I'm not an authority on the Iromakuanhe

But here are a few things I found.
Birth and Almost Booms

Missing apostrophe
the boys strange should be the boy's strange

Skills,
Fighting
Red link for Faelraig
[[romakuanhe:laiz_faelraig|Faelraig]] missing the i at the beginning

Medical
comerades should be comrades

Humanities
it's should be its it's is the contraction for it is
 
Kokuten,

I've asked Exhack to do the next review of your character since he created the race, he would know best if there are any issues.

Nashoba.
 
I had reviewed this extensively as it was being written, and found it up to par and consistent with the Iroma part of the setting. I only wanted another reviewer to impartially check for personality and history inconsistencies and spelling errors, since I thought I liked the character too much.

That said, it meets the grade.

This character is approved for IC usage.
 
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